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I see you have been working on this page last month, and I had a couple of suggestions for some readings. | I see you have been working on this page last month, and I had a couple of suggestions for some readings. | ||
In the | In the second paragraph, "For the pain of sensation " I think you should use "For the pair of sensations", and likewise change "pain of appellation" to "pair of appellations". | ||
In the same paragraph "order in which we hid them", should, I think, be "order in which we find them" | |||
Hope this is of some help, | |||
Mary Foutz | |||
Hi
I see you have been working on this page last month, and I had a couple of suggestions for some readings.
In the second paragraph, "For the pain of sensation " I think you should use "For the pair of sensations", and likewise change "pain of appellation" to "pair of appellations".
In the same paragraph "order in which we hid them", should, I think, be "order in which we find them"
Hope this is of some help,
Mary Foutz
