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Suggestion -- Mfoutz 15:00, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Hi

I see you have been working on this page last month, and I had a couple of suggestions for some readings.

In the second paragraph, "For the pain of sensation " I think you should use "For the pair of sensations", and likewise change "pain of appellation" to "pair of appellations".

In the same paragraph "order in which we hid them", should, I think, be "order in which we find them"

Hope this is of some help,

Mary Foutz

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